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Shiro
Jun 14, 2009 10:07:44 GMT -5
Post by Majin Cajabe on Jun 14, 2009 10:07:44 GMT -5
Sounds cool, post it's finalized version up for me to quote.
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Shiro
Jun 14, 2009 10:11:57 GMT -5
Post by Shiro on Jun 14, 2009 10:11:57 GMT -5
Name: World Surprise Attack >Replaced> Thunder Armor Description: Shiro turns his ki into electrical energy, then circulates that energy throughout his body. The electricity acts as a barrier of sorts, shocking anything that comes withing range. Effects: Adds an electric shock to all of Shiro's physical attacks and shocks opponents that try to attack him physically. The shock stuns the area hit for a few moments afterwards. Defects: Lasts three posts. Requires one post charging. Very draining. One use per battle.
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Shiro
Jun 14, 2009 10:57:41 GMT -5
Post by Majin Cajabe on Jun 14, 2009 10:57:41 GMT -5
Name: World Surprise Attack >Replaced> Thunder Armor Description: Shiro turns his ki into electrical energy, then circulates that energy throughout his body. The electricity acts as a barrier of sorts, shocking anything that comes withing range. Effects: Adds an electric shock to all of Shiro's physical attacks and shocks opponents that try to attack him physically. The shock stuns the area hit for a few moments afterwards. Defects: Lasts three posts. Requires one post charging. Very draining. One use per battle. Accepted
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Shiro
Jul 4, 2009 14:18:54 GMT -5
Post by Shiro on Jul 4, 2009 14:18:54 GMT -5
Megaton Punch: Shiro is able to perform a weaker version of this attack without spending a turn charging. However, since it's weaker, he doesn't get the speed boost before using the attack and the shockwaves do a little less damage. This version is called the Halfton Punch.
Megaton Punch Upgrade> Megaton Barrage: Shiro spends three turns charging, then dashes at his opponent at incredible speeds and releases dozens of Megaton Punches all over their body. The conflicting shockwaves not only stun the opponent, but also do internal damage. Alternately, Shiro can charge for two posts and release dozens of Halfton punches. Shiro can only use either version once per battle.
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Shiro
Jul 4, 2009 14:25:39 GMT -5
Post by Project Harvest on Jul 4, 2009 14:25:39 GMT -5
Megaton Punch: Shiro is able to perform a weaker version of this attack without spending a turn charging. However, since it's weaker, he doesn't get the speed boost before using the attack and the shockwaves do a little less damage. This version is called the Halfton Punch. Megaton Punch Upgrade> Megaton Barrage: Shiro spends three turns charging, then dashes at his opponent at incredible speeds and releases dozens of Megaton Punches all over their body. The conflicting shockwaves not only stun the opponent, but also do internal damage. Alternately, Shiro can charge for two posts and release dozens of Halfton punches. Shiro can only use either version once per battle. Looks fine to me. Style & Upgrade Accepted.
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Shiro
Jul 24, 2009 16:20:48 GMT -5
Post by Shiro on Jul 24, 2009 16:20:48 GMT -5
Super Volleyball Fist > Vortex Blade(Upgrade) Shiro uses the speed of the after image technique to dash around his opponent, slashing at them with a sword as he passes. As he moves, the speed generates a whirlwind around his victim, which draws blood out of the wounds. Does more damage the more heavily wounded the victim is. Requires one post charging. One use per battle.
Universal Transmission > Perfect Transmission Shiro has discovered a way to leave a portion of his ki in objects and androids. He can use this ki to UT to places that normally lack ki signals. He can also put ki in small objects, like knives, and UT them to himself. This takes a post of focus, but uses a little less energy than creating the object from scratch. It takes one post of focus to add his ki to something. He can't use this on dragonballs.
Also slight edit to Halfton Punch: Megaton Punch: Shiro is able to perform a weaker version of this attack without spending a turn charging. However, since it's weaker, he doesn't get the speed boost before using the attack and the shockwaves do a little less damage. This version is called the Halfton Punch and can be used twice in ten posts instead of once.
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Shiro
Jul 24, 2009 18:00:44 GMT -5
Post by Majin Cajabe on Jul 24, 2009 18:00:44 GMT -5
Super Volleyball Fist > Vortex Blade(Upgrade) Shiro uses the speed of the after image technique to dash around his opponent, slashing at them with a sword as he passes. As he moves, the speed generates a whirlwind around his victim, which draws blood out of the wounds. Does more damage the more heavily wounded the victim is. Requires one post charging. One use per battle. Accepted with a fair ki drain from all the whirlwindish slashes. I don't think you can upgrade an upgrade. XD This is adding more on to UT so it's not really acceptable as a function alteration, either. =/ Sure for the bold edit.
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Shiro
Jul 28, 2009 20:27:46 GMT -5
Post by Shiro on Jul 28, 2009 20:27:46 GMT -5
More slight edits to Sky Render:
Name: Sky Render Description: Shiro uses his ki in conjunction with his sword skills to varying effects. Effects: 1. Shiro can create up to two short wakizashi style swords or one full sized katana style sword with his ki. At any time Shiro can combine his short swords into the single blade, or vice versa.
2. Shiro can use his ki to reinforce and sharpen whatever weapons he’s currently using. The blades are now capable of cutting through ki attacks they meet head on.
3. Shiro can fire crescents of ki with a slashing motion of his hands, feet, or weapons. The crescents move very vast and are very sharp, even capable of cutting through other ki attacks if they hit edge first. Shiro may also release many ki crescents at once if he charges enough.
Defects: 1. The ki blades are a constant drain on Shiro's ki while they're being used. The blades can be broken with sufficient force.
2. Also a constant drain on Shiro’s ki, though not as much as forming new blades. The blades cannot cut through attacks that ignore power level, are 10x or 100x, or use life force to power them.
3. Shiro has to charge for a moment before he can use the ki crescents. The attack also takes a decent bit out of him. Firing multiple crescents takes a good deal more ki and requires at least one post charging. The blades are also unlikely to cut through limbs unless the conditions are right.
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Shiro
Jul 28, 2009 21:05:42 GMT -5
Post by Katatonia on Jul 28, 2009 21:05:42 GMT -5
More slight edits to Sky Render: Name: Sky Render Description: Shiro uses his ki in conjunction with his sword skills to varying effects. Effects: 1. Shiro can create up to two short wakizashi style swords or one full sized katana style sword with his ki. At any time Shiro can combine his short swords into the single blade, or vice versa. 2. Shiro can use his ki to reinforce and sharpen whatever weapons he’s currently using. The blades are now capable of cutting through ki attacks they meet head on. 3. Shiro can fire crescents of ki with a slashing motion of his hands, feet, or weapons. The crescents move very vast and are very sharp, even capable of cutting through other ki attacks if they hit edge first. Shiro may also release many ki crescents at once if he charges enough. Defects: 1. The ki blades are a constant drain on Shiro's ki while they're being used. The blades can be broken with sufficient force. 2. Also a constant drain on Shiro’s ki, though not as much as forming new blades. The blades cannot cut through attacks that ignore power level, are 10x or 100x, or use life force to power them. 3. Shiro has to charge for a moment before he can use the ki crescents. The attack also takes a decent bit out of him. Firing multiple crescents takes a good deal more ki and requires at least one post charging. The blades are also unlikely to cut through limbs unless the conditions are right. Makes sense.
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Shiro
Jul 31, 2009 21:27:49 GMT -5
Post by Shiro on Jul 31, 2009 21:27:49 GMT -5
Change to Shiro's outfit:
Becomes
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Shiro
Aug 1, 2009 7:38:31 GMT -5
Post by Katatonia on Aug 1, 2009 7:38:31 GMT -5
Shiro wears a pair of black cloth pants and a dark grey sleeveless shirt. Black leather, steel-toed boots protect his feet while fingerless black gloves with metal studs on the knuckles protect his hands. Sure.
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