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Hero
May 16, 2009 4:07:10 GMT -5
Post by Hero on May 16, 2009 4:07:10 GMT -5
Name: Hero Race: Demon-Human Age: 20 Sex: Male Alignment: Pure Evil Hair Color: White / Gray Hair Style: Long Eye Color: Blackish Red Height: 5'11
Body Appearance: Hero is slender and has a sleek physique, he is good shape his body type is more of a runner, he is fit and has a lot of endurance, His body build give him great speed and quickness he is quick like a shadow but he lacks slight physical strength. He is slender and in top shape
Clothes: Hero wears a long black cape that has a sickle like shape at the end of it, he has jagged shapes in it as well, Hero wears black metal boots and a full black metal body suite that has protective amour on it that is not really protective it just serves as decoration for effect. Hero has a green emblem on his chest that says "Live" it is made out of a green emerald and it is priceless to him. Hero wears long gloves that have spikes on the elbows and small spikes on the fingertips; only one of his hands has the blades on them. Also he wears a mask to cover his true face. The mask is a v-shape that has a few engagements on it to make it stand out and look fancy
Ki/Energy Color: Blackish/Dark Redish
Quote: "How Dare You"
Story: Hero was born the bastard child of the mix of a human and demon, he lead a sheltered childhood and was abused by his stepfather sexually and mentally. Hero lives in his own world he thinks of himself as a vigilante he likes to hunt down criminals. One night hero was savagely beat by his step father when his demon power was unleashed while he was being beat his body pulsed and erupted with a rage never told to man, a blackish red aura surrounded his body, His eyes burned red and he stopped his step father from hurting him. He killed his stepfather and killed his mom and then left the demon world to start a new life.
He made his way to earth and thought that he could fit in but he was wrong, He killed every night in rage of what happened to him while he was a child, he felt his demon side take control over his body more and more. To suppress his anger he enrolled in a martial arts class honing in on his physical skills and his mental state of mind, but yet he was still a loose cannon he was mentally unstable and he was a wild cannon. He was strong but yet weak, He looked for real friends but could never fit in with the kids around his age. Hero met Sonja they became really good friends until the day he was killed by a random black person looking for some money. Hero never knew who this random black person was; he felt that his past was punishing him for was he had done.
Hero slowly went crazy and slowly began to develop a second personality, This personality was more brutal then he really was, but yet he had a soft but this would have to be found out…
Starting Location: Earth
Signature Technique Name: Innate Edge Description: Hero can shoot weapons out of the air around him and his body using his natural bond demon powers( Example if he were to make the throwing motion of a spear a spear would appear and be thrown) Special Effects: Allows hero to throw / shoot weapons out of the air around him or his body Defects: This can cause slight exhaustion and has a one post charge, The stronger hero becomes the stronger and more powerful weapons he can expel and shoot from his body and the air around him
Desperation Attack Name: TBA Description: TBA
Special Notes Finger Blades (The Blades that are on his right hand)
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Hero
May 16, 2009 4:43:41 GMT -5
Post by attleborotaco on May 16, 2009 4:43:41 GMT -5
Name: Hero(Goes by Hellzone) Race: Demon-Human Age: 20 Sex: Male Alignment: Pure Evil Hair Color: White / Gray Hair Style: Long Eye Color: Blackish Red Height: 5'11 Body Appearance: Hero is slender and has a sleek physique, he is good shape his body type is more of a runner, he is fit and has a lot of endurance, His body build give him great speed and quickness he is quick like a shadow but he lacks slight phyisical strength. He is slender and in top shape Clothes: Hero wears a long black cape that has a sickle like shape at the end of it, he has jagged shapes in it as well, Hero wears black metal boots and a full black metal body suite that has protective amour on it that is not really protective it just serves as decoration for effect. Hero has a green emblem on his chest that says "Live" it is made out of a green emerald and it is priceless to him. Hero wears long gloves that have spikes on the elbows and small spikes on the fingertips; only one of his hands has the blades on them. Also he wears a mask to cover his true face. The mask is a v-shape that has a few engagements on it to make it stand out and look fancy Ki/Energy Color: Blackish/Dark Redish Quote: "How Dare You" Story: Hero was born the bastard child of the mix of a human and demon, he lead a sheltered childhood and was abused by his stepfather sexually and mentally. Hero lives in his own world he thinks of himself as a vigilante he likes to hunt down criminals. One night hero was savagely beat by his step father when his demon power was unleashed while he was being beat his body pulsed and erupted with a rage never told to man, a blackish red aura surrounded his body, His eyes burned red and he stopped his step father from hurting him. He killed his stepfather and killed his mom and then left the demon world to start a new life. He made his way to earth and thought that he could fit in but he was wrong, He killed every night in rage of what happened to him while he was a child, he felt his demon side take control over his body more and more. To surpress his anger he enrolled in a martial arts class honing in on his physical skills and his mental state of mind, but yet he was still a loose cannon he was mentally unstable and he was a wild cannon. He was strong but yet weak, He looked for real friends but could never fit in with the kids around his age. Hero met Sonja they became really good friends until the day he was killed by a random black person looking for some money. Hero never knew who this random black person was; he felt that his past was punishing him for was he had done. Hero slowly went crazy and slowly began to delevolp a second personality, This personality was more brutal then he really was, but yet he had a soft but this would have to be found out… Starting Location: Earth Signature TechniqueName: Innate Edge Description: Hero can shoot weapons out of thin air and his body using his natural bond demon powers Special Effects: Allows hero to throw / shoot weapons out of thin air or his body Defects: This does not take a lot of stress because he is using his natural demon powers Desperation AttackName: TBA Description: TBA Special NotesFinger Blades (The Blades that are on his right hand) Accepted
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Hero
May 16, 2009 8:54:20 GMT -5
Post by Katatonia on May 16, 2009 8:54:20 GMT -5
WTF kind of sig defect is that? I sense another overpowered technique... you could shoot a weapon point blank whenever you wanted.
Overruling. Technique denied, man. Fix it or change it.
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Hero
May 16, 2009 13:11:24 GMT -5
Post by Nai on May 16, 2009 13:11:24 GMT -5
I'll accept this technique, but I highly advise you to do something with it. Demons already have the ability to create a weapon. So you could just do that and throw it in the next post. Essentially your technique is useless. I'll accept this, just because its not overpowered, but I really really advise you do something special with it
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Hero
May 16, 2009 16:00:26 GMT -5
Post by Katatonia on May 16, 2009 16:00:26 GMT -5
It does have special properties in that he can get weapons to shoot out of his body. But now he added the throwing motion thing he overshot and made it underpowered. XD So difficult.
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Hero
May 16, 2009 16:12:48 GMT -5
Post by Hero on May 16, 2009 16:12:48 GMT -5
Well if you look at it like this, Say im in a ki stuggle right? i can use this power to shoot blades out of my hands surpassing the ki and impaling the oppent
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Hero
May 16, 2009 16:22:18 GMT -5
Post by Katatonia on May 16, 2009 16:22:18 GMT -5
Won't the blades be vaporized by the ki though or at least partially disintegrated and/or warped?
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Hero
May 16, 2009 16:34:30 GMT -5
Post by Hero on May 16, 2009 16:34:30 GMT -5
Yea thats true, In fact your right
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Hero
May 21, 2009 2:10:58 GMT -5
Post by Hero on May 21, 2009 2:10:58 GMT -5
Special Notes Pure Madness : Hero has convinced himself that his aura is alive and that it has a mind of his own and it do whatever it wants when it wants, This special note only serves for my rping purpose and will explain itself in the future.
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Hero
May 21, 2009 2:44:31 GMT -5
Post by Majin Cajabe on May 21, 2009 2:44:31 GMT -5
Special Notes Pure Madness : Hero has convinced himself that his aura is alive and that it has a mind of his own and it do whatever it wants when it wants, This special note only serves for my rping purpose and will explain itself in the future. Lulz, I'm curious to see what you do with this... asseptid.
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Hero
May 21, 2009 3:41:42 GMT -5
Post by rex on May 21, 2009 3:41:42 GMT -5
Giggles....Me to
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Hero
May 26, 2009 6:16:21 GMT -5
Post by Hero on May 26, 2009 6:16:21 GMT -5
Dark Kamehameha: Gather ki in both hands, cupped at your side, while speaking the name of this attack. Thrust your hands at your target, and release the legendary wave. This is also pretty good at putting fires out.
Simply changing the name and the colors, it will now be dark red and black instead of the blue color it is
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Hero
May 26, 2009 8:44:17 GMT -5
Post by Shiro on May 26, 2009 8:44:17 GMT -5
Dark Kamehameha: Gather ki in both hands, cupped at your side, while speaking the name of this attack. Thrust your hands at your target, and release the legendary wave. This is also pretty good at putting fires out. Simply changing the name and the colors, it will now be dark red and black instead of the blue color it is Accepted
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Hero
Jun 1, 2009 10:09:15 GMT -5
Post by Hero on Jun 1, 2009 10:09:15 GMT -5
Special Notes: Pure Evil Base - 100% <--- This is used while hero's aura is in "control" of his body
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Hero
Jun 1, 2009 11:52:02 GMT -5
Post by Majin Cajabe on Jun 1, 2009 11:52:02 GMT -5
Special Notes: Pure Evil Base - 100% <--- This is used while hero's aura is in "control" of his body Cool. Accepted
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Hero
Jun 4, 2009 15:37:52 GMT -5
Post by Hero on Jun 4, 2009 15:37:52 GMT -5
Name: You Got Knocked Da Fuck Out (Bloody Rage) Description: Hero plants his feet into the ground hard and he looks up into the sky as it turns dark and his body begins shake and rattle. His eyes turn blood red, He will start to bleed from the eyes and palms and shake hardly. Hero will then throw his hand into the sky and he starts to fire swords out of his palm, These swords will form around hero's opponent and the will shoot into the ground and impale there feet making it so his they can't move can't move. Now in a vicious rage hero will rush full speed forwards his opponent and beat the shit out of them (similar to hate rush but faster and stronger) Now Hero will be Teeing off on his opponent blow after blow will connect, Also his opponent will be covered in blood due to the fact blood is puring out of hero's palms, Hero will not die due to blood loose, With the last blows connecting with his opponents face hero will fall to the ground knocked out and the same will happen for his opponent. The force and damage of this attack will be enough to knock out his opponent alone, Due to the huge energy lose hero is knocked out
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Hero
Jun 4, 2009 16:01:26 GMT -5
Post by Majin Cajabe on Jun 4, 2009 16:01:26 GMT -5
Name: You Got Knocked Da Fuck Out (Bloody Rage) Description: Hero plants his feet into the ground hard and he looks up into the sky as it turns dark and his body begins shake and rattle. His eyes turn blood red, He will start to bleed from the eyes and palms and shake hardly. Hero will then throw his hand into the sky and he starts to fire swords out of his palm, These swords will form around hero's opponent and the will shoot into the ground and impale there feet making it so his they can't move can't move. Now in a vicious rage hero will rush full speed forwards his opponent and beat the shit out of them (similar to hate rush but faster and stronger) Now Hero will be Teeing off on his opponent blow after blow will connect, Also his opponent will be covered in blood due to the fact blood is puring out of hero's palms, Hero will not die due to blood loose, With the last blows connecting with his opponents face hero will fall to the ground knocked out and the same will happen for his opponent. The force and damage of this attack will be enough to knock out his opponent alone, Due to the huge energy lose hero is knocked out Sweet
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Hero
Jun 6, 2009 12:10:09 GMT -5
Post by Hero on Jun 6, 2009 12:10:09 GMT -5
Special Notes: Cats Eye : If hero does 30 post training in the dark his eyes will come custom to fighting in the dark, He will be able to see just as it was day time out. So if it is pitch black hero will be able to see what is going on regardless.
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Hero
Jun 6, 2009 12:15:42 GMT -5
Post by King Badura on Jun 6, 2009 12:15:42 GMT -5
Special Notes: Cats Eye : If hero does 30 post training in the dark his eyes will come custom to fighting in the dark, He will be able to see just as it was day time out. So if it is pitch black hero will be able to see what is going on regardless. Denied. That's cheap. I can't even see in the dark! Why would you be any different? What nerve! I am going to have fun with you soon...
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Hero
Jun 6, 2009 13:10:24 GMT -5
Post by Hero on Jun 6, 2009 13:10:24 GMT -5
Super Kamehameha: Same as the regular Kamehameha, but with at least 1 turn of charge to deliver a lot more power. As a random note, a Super Kamehameha is powerful enough to be used to escape the gravitational pull of a star.
^Simple Name Change To Super Dark Kamehameha, also the color is now black and red not blue
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Hero
Jun 6, 2009 13:11:48 GMT -5
Post by Katatonia on Jun 6, 2009 13:11:48 GMT -5
Super Kamehameha: Same as the regular Kamehameha, but with at least 1 turn of charge to deliver a lot more power. As a random note, a Super Kamehameha is powerful enough to be used to escape the gravitational pull of a star. ^Simple Name Change To Super Dark Kamehameha, also the color is now black and red now blue Accepted as long as you fix the typo at the end from 'now blue' to 'not blue'. XD
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Hero
Jun 6, 2009 13:12:53 GMT -5
Post by Hero on Jun 6, 2009 13:12:53 GMT -5
BAM FIXED XD
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