Post by Nai on May 26, 2009 1:09:36 GMT -5
Name: Crash
Race: Namekian Demon
Age: 0
Sex: Neuter
Alignment: Good
Hair Color: None
Hair Style: None
Eye Color: Black
Height: 4 feet
Body Appearance: Rather short and plump. He's a bit fat, too. Light green skin, and his head is like a Namekian's,
but he doesn't have antennas.
Clothes: He wears just a full, blue suit, and he has his own, white, Piccolo cape too. He has the small,
brown Namekian shoes. Basically his clothing covers his whole body, except for his head.
Ki/Energy Color: Green
Quote: "I'm NOT a mistake!"
Story: Nai, the father, decided that in case he died, he would at least have someone to continue his legacy.
He actually messed up, and when he spat out the egg, a demon spawn rather than another Namekian popped out.
Nai didn't actually mind this too much. Maybe it means he won't actually die in his upcoming battle.
Starting Location: Destroyed West City
Signature Technique
Name: High Speed CRASH
Description: Crash begins powering up. Once he has gathered enough ki around him, he flies forward, with his
aura flaming around him!
Special Effects: Exactly like flaming headbutt, but with a twist: he can freely move around with it as if
he was flying! He basically becomes his own ki attack.
Defects: Altering his path uses a significant amount of ki. It's more of a last resort.
Desperation Attack
Name: Will be designed when the post count is reached or almost reached
Description:
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Name: Shen
Race: Saiyan
Age: 23
Sex: Male
Alignment: Neutral
Hair Color: Black
Hair Style: Like Goku's
Eye Color: Black
Height: 6'0
Body Appearance: Shen is a tall, well built man since he's spent his whole life training with his parents.
His face however is not as emotionless as his training would make him seem, as it is usually filled and radiated
with emotion.
Clothes: On his legs are black, somewhat baggy pants. On his upper body, he wears a black sleveless top,
with a red vest underneath. On his feet are black Goku styled boots. On top of all of this, he wears a
jacket, which only goes down as far as his waist. It's somewhat tight, as it highlights Shen's well toned arms.
This jacket is actually weighted. The jacket is red in color, with a gold zipper.
Ki/Energy Color: Dark Purple
Quote: "King Vegeta... you will DIE!"
Story:
One day, a team of Saiyans were personally ordered by Vegeta to explore a planet. Little did these poor Saiyans know; this planet had an extremely poisonous atmosphere. As soon as they landed on the planet, they felt most of their power escaping them. When it was time to fight the beings that ambushed them, most of them died instantly. Many of them attempted to create a false moon and transform but... that didn't work...!?!?
Two Saiyans barely managed to escape the mission, and they were the only survivors. They came back to Vegeta,
explaining the events to the King himself.
"My King..." One tall, handsome, male Saiyan would address to his King, kneeling down, "The mission was a complete
failure. The atmosphere was so poisonous that we even lost our ability to transform permanently!"
"I do not tolerate excuses for failure!" the King thunders. "Leave at once!"
The male Saiyan and the female Saiyan accompanying him left, getting jostled, pushed and ridiculed by the elite Saiyans. Enraged, they decided that they would train and one day put the King in his place. The two Saiyans fell in love during their training, and gave birth to their first son, Shen.
Unfortunately, Shen was also cursed with the atmosphere poison that plagued his parents. After learning of why this has happened and why he is in his current situation, he has promised to have revenge on Vegeta as well. He dreams of the day he can put the King in his place.
One day, he makes his way to the dojo to start learning new techniques. But he is ambushed by a group of Saiyans. After finding out that he is the son of the two Saiyans that lost their Saiyan transformations, they begin to mock him and make sport of him. That is when they are put to slow, painful deaths by the Namekian warrior, Nai. Nai and Shen engage in conversation and after hearing Shen's story, Nai decides to take Shen in as his student. He hopes to bring Shen to be as powerful as his Saiyan bretheren one day.
Starting Location: Vegeta Cities
Signature Technique
Name: Poisonous Saiyan
Description: Shen is poisonous! Be cautious around him... Especially now that he's starting to grow excess poison in his body.
Effects:
1. He expels all excess poison from his body, causing a whole cloud of poison to cover his body. There's so much poison that Shen literally can not be seen. Nothing he does inside the cloud can be seen either. Anyone inside the cloud can see Shen, but their senses will noticeably drop. It only goes as far as melee range. He can also use this cloud to do a few different things, explained below.
2. If he expels the poison from his body, he can actually fire it out at his opponent, making their senses noticeably drop for the turn he uses it in. Every turn of charge will add one more turn of senses dropped time.
3. He expels the poison, backing it up with his ki to make a force field. It stops any attack and knocks back anyone who touches it. The ki and poison are sustained all throughout the field, so you can't IT into the field and expect to cheap shot him.
Defects:
1: The poison, when expelled, lasts for three turns before Shen runs out of excess poison to force out, which will then fade up into the air. This can only be done once per ten turns, because Shen needs to allow excess enough poison in his body to grow before letting it explode out again.
2: It's not unavoidable, in fact it travels at the same space as a basic ki blast. Also, a basic ki blast can actually destroy the poison when Shen fires it from his body. Requires the first effect to be active in order for this to happen.
3: One use per battle, fairly draining. Requires the first effect to be active.
Desperation Attack
Name: Dimensional Splitter
Description: Shen forms a sword that glows a different color each nanosecond. It glows every possible color the naked eye can see, and on the off chance that every color is shown, the cycle restarts.
Shen then slashes his sword wildly, each slash releasing cuts of extremely powerful concentrated ki. But he slashes with such ferocity that given his power level advantage of being in a desperation, the ki cuts can not be seen, but will appear once their targets are hit (it's like Shen is outlining the cuts through the air with his sword. So if he slashes at his opponent in a horizontal fashion, in a moment later, a large horizontal slash of ki will appear across his opponent). In addition, the cuts are so powerful that they slice right through the air, causing a disturbance that's strong enough to completely refract light. It'll refract the senses too... And to the opponent being slashed, it'll seem like he/she got cut in pieces, due to how distorted their vision becomes due to the light refraction. But all they have to do is step away from where the cuts were formed, and everything is normal again.
Enough for the pretty aesthetic effects. With no charge, this is enough to brutally beat down an opponent and cause many injuries. With one turn of charge, it's very capable of bringing them down to weakened 50% even if they were in prime shape. And with the full two posts, he might have a guaranteed shot at tying the battle. The cuts inject ki that go inside the opponent's body and cause injuries from the inside as opposed to cutting the outside and causing bleeding. That way it's impossible to die from this attack.
Special Notes
(upgrades have two dashes before the arrow, changes that are meant to replace the technique have one)
False Moon --> Blutz Shotgun
Shen channels the concentrated ki of a false moon into his fist and unleashes all of it in a scattered blast, shotgun style. The technique sacrifices damage for speed and sheer force. It's not as fast as a shockwave, but it's strong enough to knock someone down at melee range. No real damage. It's actually as draining to use as a false moon, but the advantage provided by knocking his opponent down will hopefully be worth it.
Sauzer Blade -> Energy Sword
This replaces Sauzer Blade. Instead of forming ki around his arm, Shen forces ki out of one of his hands, or both, and the ki takes the shape for a sword. The sword is as long as an ordinary sword: not short, but not long. The ki is concentrated at the tip and the edges to deal strong, cutting damage. He may also use a broken sword medium to provide a strong base from which he can channel his ki in order to cut the ki drain of this technique in half. However, he has to have a full grip (thumb and all other fingers wrapped around the hilt) on the sword medium at all times. Otherwise the ki will disappear and he has to gather more again.
Energy Sword --> Dimension Slasher
If Shen gathers energy for one uninterrupted post, his energy sword becomes so concentrated at the tip and edges that it can just tear through things, regardless of power level. As draining to use as destructo disk, and follows all the rules of attacks that ignore power level. But the sword can only be used to attempt to tear through things ONCE. Then it disappears, and Shen then has to make another.
Final Impact --> Final Stand
Shen surrounds himself with an aura of his life force, which enhances all of his abilities drastically. He essentially becomes a physical tri beam for a post. Requires one turn of gathering life force. Puts him in weakened, unable to use a desperation. Can't use this in weakened either.
His jacket initially weighs 10kg.
Transformation list:
It should be noted that Shen can not go Super Saiyan, nor use any Oozaru forms. All MAJOR transformations (unless otherwise noted). require kaioken. Kaioken can also be stacked on top of kaioken influeced forms.
Enraged False Kaio-Saiyan - 106% - 0 Requires Kaioken
If Shen looks at any form of a moon, the blutz waves will amplify his kaioken and allow him to fight at the level of kaioken times 6 without hurting himself. If he's below 10,800, then the energy exerted from the transformation will cause Shen to completely lose control of himself. Recovering from this form will knock him unconscious.
Saiyan Rage - 112% - 9000 Does not require kaioken, but if he has it, his power up will show its influence.
Always requires anger caused by either the saiyan, their leader, or anyone the saiyan cares about, getting their ass kicked by a stronger opponent.
False Kaio Saiyan 117% - 9500 Requires Kaioken
Always requires anger caused by either the saiyan, their leader, or anyone the saiyan cares about, getting their ass kicked by a stronger opponent. He'll activate this as kaioken times seventeen.
After the first time this is activated, Saiyan Rage can be used at will in the form of kaioken times twelve.
Kaio-Saiyan 124% - 11'000
He must do 50 posts of intense training, and this can be split as much as necessary. Once this has been satisfied, he must experience rage of some kind, and this can only be triggered by the right circumstances and preceding events. If he's completely consumed by rage, then he may fully reach this form. His aura and body are enveloped by a dark purple with a red tint, and his hair is raised like a Super Saiyan.
After the first time this is activated, Shen can simply activate this as kaioken times 24.
Race: Namekian Demon
Age: 0
Sex: Neuter
Alignment: Good
Hair Color: None
Hair Style: None
Eye Color: Black
Height: 4 feet
Body Appearance: Rather short and plump. He's a bit fat, too. Light green skin, and his head is like a Namekian's,
but he doesn't have antennas.
Clothes: He wears just a full, blue suit, and he has his own, white, Piccolo cape too. He has the small,
brown Namekian shoes. Basically his clothing covers his whole body, except for his head.
Ki/Energy Color: Green
Quote: "I'm NOT a mistake!"
Story: Nai, the father, decided that in case he died, he would at least have someone to continue his legacy.
He actually messed up, and when he spat out the egg, a demon spawn rather than another Namekian popped out.
Nai didn't actually mind this too much. Maybe it means he won't actually die in his upcoming battle.
Starting Location: Destroyed West City
Signature Technique
Name: High Speed CRASH
Description: Crash begins powering up. Once he has gathered enough ki around him, he flies forward, with his
aura flaming around him!
Special Effects: Exactly like flaming headbutt, but with a twist: he can freely move around with it as if
he was flying! He basically becomes his own ki attack.
Defects: Altering his path uses a significant amount of ki. It's more of a last resort.
Desperation Attack
Name: Will be designed when the post count is reached or almost reached
Description:
==============================================
Name: Shen
Race: Saiyan
Age: 23
Sex: Male
Alignment: Neutral
Hair Color: Black
Hair Style: Like Goku's
Eye Color: Black
Height: 6'0
Body Appearance: Shen is a tall, well built man since he's spent his whole life training with his parents.
His face however is not as emotionless as his training would make him seem, as it is usually filled and radiated
with emotion.
Clothes: On his legs are black, somewhat baggy pants. On his upper body, he wears a black sleveless top,
with a red vest underneath. On his feet are black Goku styled boots. On top of all of this, he wears a
jacket, which only goes down as far as his waist. It's somewhat tight, as it highlights Shen's well toned arms.
This jacket is actually weighted. The jacket is red in color, with a gold zipper.
Ki/Energy Color: Dark Purple
Quote: "King Vegeta... you will DIE!"
Story:
One day, a team of Saiyans were personally ordered by Vegeta to explore a planet. Little did these poor Saiyans know; this planet had an extremely poisonous atmosphere. As soon as they landed on the planet, they felt most of their power escaping them. When it was time to fight the beings that ambushed them, most of them died instantly. Many of them attempted to create a false moon and transform but... that didn't work...!?!?
Two Saiyans barely managed to escape the mission, and they were the only survivors. They came back to Vegeta,
explaining the events to the King himself.
"My King..." One tall, handsome, male Saiyan would address to his King, kneeling down, "The mission was a complete
failure. The atmosphere was so poisonous that we even lost our ability to transform permanently!"
"I do not tolerate excuses for failure!" the King thunders. "Leave at once!"
The male Saiyan and the female Saiyan accompanying him left, getting jostled, pushed and ridiculed by the elite Saiyans. Enraged, they decided that they would train and one day put the King in his place. The two Saiyans fell in love during their training, and gave birth to their first son, Shen.
Unfortunately, Shen was also cursed with the atmosphere poison that plagued his parents. After learning of why this has happened and why he is in his current situation, he has promised to have revenge on Vegeta as well. He dreams of the day he can put the King in his place.
One day, he makes his way to the dojo to start learning new techniques. But he is ambushed by a group of Saiyans. After finding out that he is the son of the two Saiyans that lost their Saiyan transformations, they begin to mock him and make sport of him. That is when they are put to slow, painful deaths by the Namekian warrior, Nai. Nai and Shen engage in conversation and after hearing Shen's story, Nai decides to take Shen in as his student. He hopes to bring Shen to be as powerful as his Saiyan bretheren one day.
Starting Location: Vegeta Cities
Signature Technique
Name: Poisonous Saiyan
Description: Shen is poisonous! Be cautious around him... Especially now that he's starting to grow excess poison in his body.
Effects:
1. He expels all excess poison from his body, causing a whole cloud of poison to cover his body. There's so much poison that Shen literally can not be seen. Nothing he does inside the cloud can be seen either. Anyone inside the cloud can see Shen, but their senses will noticeably drop. It only goes as far as melee range. He can also use this cloud to do a few different things, explained below.
2. If he expels the poison from his body, he can actually fire it out at his opponent, making their senses noticeably drop for the turn he uses it in. Every turn of charge will add one more turn of senses dropped time.
3. He expels the poison, backing it up with his ki to make a force field. It stops any attack and knocks back anyone who touches it. The ki and poison are sustained all throughout the field, so you can't IT into the field and expect to cheap shot him.
Defects:
1: The poison, when expelled, lasts for three turns before Shen runs out of excess poison to force out, which will then fade up into the air. This can only be done once per ten turns, because Shen needs to allow excess enough poison in his body to grow before letting it explode out again.
2: It's not unavoidable, in fact it travels at the same space as a basic ki blast. Also, a basic ki blast can actually destroy the poison when Shen fires it from his body. Requires the first effect to be active in order for this to happen.
3: One use per battle, fairly draining. Requires the first effect to be active.
Desperation Attack
Name: Dimensional Splitter
Description: Shen forms a sword that glows a different color each nanosecond. It glows every possible color the naked eye can see, and on the off chance that every color is shown, the cycle restarts.
Shen then slashes his sword wildly, each slash releasing cuts of extremely powerful concentrated ki. But he slashes with such ferocity that given his power level advantage of being in a desperation, the ki cuts can not be seen, but will appear once their targets are hit (it's like Shen is outlining the cuts through the air with his sword. So if he slashes at his opponent in a horizontal fashion, in a moment later, a large horizontal slash of ki will appear across his opponent). In addition, the cuts are so powerful that they slice right through the air, causing a disturbance that's strong enough to completely refract light. It'll refract the senses too... And to the opponent being slashed, it'll seem like he/she got cut in pieces, due to how distorted their vision becomes due to the light refraction. But all they have to do is step away from where the cuts were formed, and everything is normal again.
Enough for the pretty aesthetic effects. With no charge, this is enough to brutally beat down an opponent and cause many injuries. With one turn of charge, it's very capable of bringing them down to weakened 50% even if they were in prime shape. And with the full two posts, he might have a guaranteed shot at tying the battle. The cuts inject ki that go inside the opponent's body and cause injuries from the inside as opposed to cutting the outside and causing bleeding. That way it's impossible to die from this attack.
Special Notes
(upgrades have two dashes before the arrow, changes that are meant to replace the technique have one)
False Moon --> Blutz Shotgun
Shen channels the concentrated ki of a false moon into his fist and unleashes all of it in a scattered blast, shotgun style. The technique sacrifices damage for speed and sheer force. It's not as fast as a shockwave, but it's strong enough to knock someone down at melee range. No real damage. It's actually as draining to use as a false moon, but the advantage provided by knocking his opponent down will hopefully be worth it.
Sauzer Blade -> Energy Sword
This replaces Sauzer Blade. Instead of forming ki around his arm, Shen forces ki out of one of his hands, or both, and the ki takes the shape for a sword. The sword is as long as an ordinary sword: not short, but not long. The ki is concentrated at the tip and the edges to deal strong, cutting damage. He may also use a broken sword medium to provide a strong base from which he can channel his ki in order to cut the ki drain of this technique in half. However, he has to have a full grip (thumb and all other fingers wrapped around the hilt) on the sword medium at all times. Otherwise the ki will disappear and he has to gather more again.
Energy Sword --> Dimension Slasher
If Shen gathers energy for one uninterrupted post, his energy sword becomes so concentrated at the tip and edges that it can just tear through things, regardless of power level. As draining to use as destructo disk, and follows all the rules of attacks that ignore power level. But the sword can only be used to attempt to tear through things ONCE. Then it disappears, and Shen then has to make another.
Final Impact --> Final Stand
Shen surrounds himself with an aura of his life force, which enhances all of his abilities drastically. He essentially becomes a physical tri beam for a post. Requires one turn of gathering life force. Puts him in weakened, unable to use a desperation. Can't use this in weakened either.
His jacket initially weighs 10kg.
Transformation list:
It should be noted that Shen can not go Super Saiyan, nor use any Oozaru forms. All MAJOR transformations (unless otherwise noted). require kaioken. Kaioken can also be stacked on top of kaioken influeced forms.
Enraged False Kaio-Saiyan - 106% - 0 Requires Kaioken
If Shen looks at any form of a moon, the blutz waves will amplify his kaioken and allow him to fight at the level of kaioken times 6 without hurting himself. If he's below 10,800, then the energy exerted from the transformation will cause Shen to completely lose control of himself. Recovering from this form will knock him unconscious.
Saiyan Rage - 112% - 9000 Does not require kaioken, but if he has it, his power up will show its influence.
Always requires anger caused by either the saiyan, their leader, or anyone the saiyan cares about, getting their ass kicked by a stronger opponent.
False Kaio Saiyan 117% - 9500 Requires Kaioken
Always requires anger caused by either the saiyan, their leader, or anyone the saiyan cares about, getting their ass kicked by a stronger opponent. He'll activate this as kaioken times seventeen.
After the first time this is activated, Saiyan Rage can be used at will in the form of kaioken times twelve.
Kaio-Saiyan 124% - 11'000
He must do 50 posts of intense training, and this can be split as much as necessary. Once this has been satisfied, he must experience rage of some kind, and this can only be triggered by the right circumstances and preceding events. If he's completely consumed by rage, then he may fully reach this form. His aura and body are enveloped by a dark purple with a red tint, and his hair is raised like a Super Saiyan.
After the first time this is activated, Shen can simply activate this as kaioken times 24.