Oryan's Squad(Good)

[Oryan Kaishin]

Name: Kumori Seishou
Race: Mutant(Kitsune) {+Speed/Skill}<-Endurance>
Age: 17
Sex: Male
Alignment: Good
Hair Color: Crimson w/Deep Purple streaks
Hair Style: The front is parted to the right with a generally wind-blown look while the back extends down to the middle of his back. The back of his hair is bundled together into a thin strand by a long elastic tube. The tip of his hair sticks out at the end of the tube to appear as a lion's tail.
Eye Color: Silver on the outer edges, blending to Emerald Green near the center.
Height:"4,10"
Weight: 112 Lbs.
Body Appearance: Kumori is a rather fragile looking being. Most wouldn't believe what power he has if they weren't able to sense his abilities. His skin is very fair. He is very slender and small. Some may mistake him for a child if viewing him from behind. He has black tipped red fox ears and a single black tipped, bushy red fox tail to match, both marks of his Kitsune heritage. There are no scars on his body.
Clothes: He wears a tightly fitting, waist length, sleeveless, black overcoat. Under his thick overcoat lies a full gray bodysuit. It covers everything from his nose down to his toes. He wears Ice blue forearm guards and shin guards with white trim around the edges of each. A Green silk sash is tied tightly around his waist. His one tail pokes out the back of his bodysuit.
Ki/Energy Color: Emerald Green
Quote: "What do you call a curse that has become a blessing?"

Story: Kumori was originally a normal human from Earth by the name of Nagai Kohmaru. He grew up to the age of sixteen in a monastery in the mountains near North City. He was considered to be the prodigy of said monastery and was respected for having such wisdom and having obtained enlightenment at such a young age. Unfortunately the happiness he had and the respect and honor he had gained would not last. Because of his apparent spiritual strength and his incredible discipline and willpower a Youkai Kyuubi, a Kitsune with such demonic power that it had amassed all nine tails from absorbing so many souls of mortal men, set its sights on Nagai.

Even with his strong spirit and indomitable will, Nagai was basically powerless to resist the incredible demonic power of a Youkai Kyuubi. She tempted him into committing numerous sins of the flesh. Under normal circumstances after a Youkai has had her way with a human being, their soul is consumed by her power and thus increases her power abundantly. For some reason Nagai did not fall prey to this fate. He instead became a Kitsune himself. Unlike the one that had broken his spiritualism and strong will with her demonic power, he was a red Kitsune instead of a white-silver Kitsune. He felt that he had fallen from the graces of heaven the moment he committed those terrible sins and was corrupted by the demonic power he could now effortlessly wield. The Youkai didn't know what to think. She looked at him in awe, almost like he was going to destroy her just by looking at her. Never had anyone been able to avoid having their soul consumed.

She did not abandon him. Instead, she used her power to control him, giving him the name he now bears, Kumori Seishou. She could no longer absorb his soul because of his own demonic power, but she could still use him. He would gather souls for her. This is where his story continues. He's currently returning to the monastery he used to live in to consume the souls of those he previously called brethren at the command of his master.(This will be where Oryan meets him, and inevitably stops him, breaking the Youkai's hold on him.)

Starting Location: Earth

Signature Techniques:

Name: Mystical Palm
Description: One of Kumori's hands will begin to glow with a pale blue light as he gathers energy. When he's channeled enough power he will then swing a blow for his opponent.
Special Effects: Should Kumori's attack succeed, his opponent will suffer all of the side effects of being in "Weakened" status for one post, but without the ability to use their desperation. They are also unable to gain any charges or focus during that post along with losing whatever charge or focus they had when the technique hit.
Defects: The foe's Powerlevel doesn't decrease as it normally would if they were weakened. This technique requires one post of charging. This takes a decent sized chunk of Ki.


Name: Binding Shadows
Description: Kumori will begin glowing with dark energy, and the next second black holes will open up around his target, shooting dark chains out and binding them in place.
Special Effects: Deactivates any charges the opponent may have had, disrupts all focus they may have gained, and holds them in place for a few cheap hits for one post.
Defects: One use per battle.

Name: Fox Fire
Description: Kumori gathers demonic energy into his tail(s). His tail(s) will then be surrounded with a blazing dark purple aura. He will then spin and unleash a devastating wave of dark purple flames at his opponent.
Special Effects: Unleashes incredibly intense flames in an arcing wave to engulf the opponent.
Defects: Takes a very large chunk of Ki due to the intensity of the flames.

Desperation Attack
Name: Darkness Within(/Run tehuberhax.exe)
Description: Using the demonic powers he was cursed with, Kumori can fade in and out of darkness at will, effectively allowing him to instantly be wherever he chooses. For an opponent, hitting him will probably become impossible. Not to mention the fact that, for two turns, he will fight at 250% his normal ability. One post of calling up his demonic power will be required before this can become active. It will reduce Kumori to an unconscious state once the two posts are up. Must be used within the first three posts of going weakened or it can't be used at all.

Special Notes:
His overcoat weighs 10kg.

[Nai]

Jun 15, 2009 22:22:13 GMT -5 Oryan Kaishin said:

Name: Kumori Seishou
Race: Mutant(Kitsune) {Speed/Skill}
Age: 17
Sex: Male
Alignment: Good
Hair Color: Ice Blue w/Deep Purple streaks
Hair Style: The front is parted to the right with a generally wind-blown look while the back extends down to the middle of his back. The back of his hair is bundled together into a thin strand by a long elastic tube. The tip of his hair sticks out at the end of the tube to appear as a lion's tail.
Eye Color: Silver on the outer edges, blending to Emerald Green near the center.
Height:"4,10"
Weight: 112 Lbs.
Body Appearance: Kumori is a rather fragile looking being. Most wouldn't believe what power he has if they weren't able to sense his abilities. His skin is very fair. He is very slender and small. Some may mistake him for a child if viewing him from behind. He has black tipped red fox ears and a single black tipped, bushy red fox tail to match, both marks of his Kitsune heritage. There are no scars on his body.
Clothes: He wears a tightly fitting, waist length, sleeveless, black overcoat. Under his thick overcoat lies a full gray bodysuit. It covers everything from his nose down to his toes. He wears Ice blue forearm guards and shin guards with white trim around the edges of each. A Green silk sash is tied tightly around his waist. His one tail pokes out the back of his bodysuit.
Ki/Energy Color: Emerald Green
Quote: "What do you call a curse that has become a blessing?"

Story: Kumori was originally a normal human from Earth by the name of Nagai Kohmaru. He grew up to the age of sixteen in a monastery in the mountains near North City. He was considered to be the prodigy of said monastery and was respected for having such wisdom and having obtained enlightenment at such a young age. Unfortunately the happiness he had and the respect and honor he had gained would not last. Because of his apparent spiritual strength and his incredible discipline and willpower a Youkai Kyuubi, a Kitsune with such demonic power that it had amassed all nine tails from absorbing so many souls of mortal men, set its sights on Nagai.

Even with his strong spirit and indomitable will, Nagai was basically powerless to resist the incredible demonic power of a Youkai Kyuubi. She tempted him into committing numerous sins of the flesh. Under normal circumstances after a Youkai has had her way with a human being, their soul is consumed by her power and thus increases her power abundantly. For some reason Nagai did not fall prey to this fate. He instead became a Kitsune himself. Unlike the one that had broken his spiritualism and strong will with her demonic power, he was a red Kitsune instead of a white-silver Kitsune. He felt that he had fallen from the graces of heaven the moment he committed those terrible sins and was corrupted by the demonic power he could now effortlessly wield. The Youkai didn't know what to think. She looked at him in awe, almost like he was going to destroy her just by looking at her. Never had anyone been able to avoid having their soul consumed.

She did not abandon him. Instead, she used her power to control him, giving him the name he now bears, Kumori Seishou. She could no longer absorb his soul because of his own demonic power, but she could still use him. He would gather souls for her. This is where his story continues. He's currently returning to the monastery he used to live in to consume the souls of those he previously called brethren at the command of his master.(This will be where Oryan meets him, and inevitably stops him, breaking the Youkai's hold on him.)

Starting Location: Earth

Signature Techniques:

Name: Mystical Palm
Description: Kumori is capable of, when making any form of physical attack with his hands, placing a small amount of his own energy into the opponent's body. This energy can then be used, when Kumori decides, to attack whatever vital organ the blow landed closest to. The strike itself appears no different than one of his normal attacks.
Special Effects: The strike in question will, if it hits a vital area, send a small amount of Kumori's ki into the opponent's body. They will be unable to suppress or expel this energy of their own will until the five turns after the strike hits.(The turn this technique is used doesn't count towards the five turns)

At any point during the time that the energy is in the foe's body, Kumori can command it to attack the nearest vital point to where the strike landed. This includes pressure points to render certain limbs useless, stopping bloodflow in main arteries, or attacking organs like the heart or lungs.

The attacks are not strong enough to kill, but opponents will find it incredibly difficult to fight with such an inhibition. Because of their condition, they may be required to use much more stamina to fight than if they weren't under these effects in case of the heart, lungs, or main artery that runs through the neck to the brain being damaged by this attack. In case of a direct attack to the brain, or a hit to the base of the spine, the nervous system will go haywire. Moving will become severely uncontrolled, drastically reducing the opponent's skill.

No matter what is hit, the effects will last three turns once Kumori decides that the energy inside his opponent should activate.

The strike doesn't have to make contact with the opponent's body to transfer the Ki, all that needs to occur is the opponent being hit by the impact. Because of this the energy used in the strike bypasses all forms armor, save for armor created from Ki. Armor created via Kai Forgery is still bypassed. It must be a defensive Ki technique to have any means of stopping this technique. Aside from armor, only dodging is an effective means of not coming under the effects of this technique.

During the three turns that this technique is active within the target, they will be unable to focus at all and charging will require twice as long due to the constant pain or stress caused by this technique's debilitating effects. These effects are not reduced by powerlevel, since it's impossible to increase the strength of one's heart, lungs, brain, or other crucial inner workings of the body against damage.
Defects: Once five turns of the energy being inside the target have passed, the energy can be expelled. The effects last three turns. No more than one Mystical Palm can be active at one time. Three uses per battle. Drains as much energy as a Crusher Ball or Burning Attack. The strike itself does no damage. The energy does no real damage, it just puts serious strain on whatever part of the body it hits, or disrupts the body's movement.

Name: Binding Shadows
Description: Kumori will begin glowing with dark energy, and the next second black holes will open up around his target, shooting dark chains out and binding them in place.
Special Effects: Deactivates any charges the opponent may have had, disrupts all focus they may have gained, and holds them in place for a few cheap hits for one post.
Defects: One use per battle.

Desperation Attack
Name: Darkness Within(/Run tehuberhax.exe)
Description: Using the demonic powers he was cursed with, Kumori can fade in and out of darkness at will, effectively allowing him to instantly be wherever he chooses. For an opponent, hitting him will probably become impossible. Not to mention the fact that, for three turns, he will fight at 250% his normal ability. One post of calling up his demonic power will be required before this can become active. It will reduce Kumori to an unconscious state once the three posts are up. Must be used within the first three posts of going weakened or it can't be used at all.

Special Notes:
His overcoat weighs 10kg.

Accepted with the following changes:

For Mystical Palm, the user should have 2 posts (not counting the one that lands) before expelling the ki. That's just because alot can happen within the span of five turns and you're giving yourself a pretty easy shot at landing this move. Imagine what happens when you combine this with moves like final impact and/or wolf fang fist? You can definitely have a guaranteed way of landing this attack, so it needs to be nerfed a bit.

Keep in mind that if the technique ends up being too cheap later on, a staff member has every right to nerf it further. We'll have to see how this plays into battle.

Darkness Within - You can fight in two posts at 250%. Shen's desperation is the same; he fights at 250% for no charge for a turn. so if you gather energy for a post, you fight at 250% for 2 turns.

[Kumori Seishou]

The first technique is to replace his original first Sig, since I'm pretty sure it's far too cheap. The second is the Sig Kumori earned from the TS.

Name: Mystical Palm
Description: One of Kumori's hands will begin to glow with a pale blue light as he gathers energy. When he's channeled enough power he will then swing a blow for his opponent.
Special Effects: Should Kumori's attack succeed, his opponent will suffer all of the side effects of being in "Weakened" status for one post, but without the ability to use their desperation. They are also unable to gain any charges or focus during that post along with losing whatever charge or focus they had when the technique hit.
Defects: The foe's Powerlevel doesn't decrease as it normally would if they were weakened. This technique requires one post of charging. This takes a decent sized chunk of Ki.




Name: Fox Fire
Description: Kumori gathers demonic energy into his tail(s). His tail(s) will then be surrounded with a blazing dark purple aura. He will then spin and unleash a devastating wave of dark purple flames at his opponent.
Special Effects: Unleashes incredibly intense flames in an arcing wave to engulf the opponent.
Defects: Takes a very large chunk of Ki due to the intensity of the flames.

[Katatonia]

Aug 8, 2009 0:53:24 GMT -5 Kumori Seishou said:

The first technique is to replace his original first Sig, since I'm pretty sure it's far too cheap. The second is the Sig Kumori earned from the TS.

Name: Mystical Palm
Description: One of Kumori's hands will begin to glow with a pale blue light as he gathers energy. When he's channeled enough power he will then swing a blow for his opponent.
Special Effects: Should Kumori's attack succeed, his opponent will suffer all of the side effects of being in "Weakened" status for one post, but without the ability to use their desperation. They are also unable to gain any charges or focus during that post along with losing whatever charge or focus they had when the technique hit.
Defects: The foe's Powerlevel doesn't decrease as it normally would if they were weakened. This technique requires one post of charging. This takes a decent sized chunk of Ki.




Name: Fox Fire
Description: Kumori gathers demonic energy into his tail(s). His tail(s) will then be surrounded with a blazing dark purple aura. He will then spin and unleash a devastating wave of dark purple flames at his opponent.
Special Effects: Unleashes incredibly intense flames in an arcing wave to engulf the opponent.
Defects: Takes a very large chunk of Ki due to the intensity of the flames.

I see nothing wrong.
Asseptid.